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Comment on Five One Line Haiku by martin

martin — Tue, 19 Aug 2008 04:27:25 +0000

a distant blossom unfolds into an egret

Comment on Sanguine by David Franke

David Franke — Sat, 16 Aug 2008 12:08:56 +0000

I really like this one. The urge to find a lost word, the memory of the girl, the fading ……. ……. It’s like that. Really glad to read this.

Comment on David Shumate’s Next Prose Poem by David Franke

David Franke — Sat, 16 Aug 2008 12:03:43 +0000

Send it out!

Comment on David Shumate’s Next Prose Poem by Scott

Scott — Tue, 17 Jun 2008 19:32:59 +0000

I am sitting in my office on campus, the latest David Shumate collection on the desk in front of me. I Google him to see what is on the web. I find your prose poem. I keep waiting for it become more of a jab at Shumate. Some of this things are wondrous little fantasies. Some of them are really not poems but microfictions. And some of them are just… things.

Why not send your “thing” to a journal and give Shumate a run for his money?

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Comment on I Believe by Mike McCulley

Mike McCulley — Fri, 25 May 2007 21:49:50 +0000

I like the way this honors the right to be different, thanks.

Comment on 222 by Colorful Prose » Blog Archive » Inanimate Things

Colorful Prose » Blog Archive » Inanimate Things — Wed, 11 Apr 2007 21:03:38 +0000

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Comment on I Believe by Crafty Green Poet

Crafty Green Poet — Tue, 10 Apr 2007 16:51:36 +0000

I’m with you there and beautifully written too.

Comment on The Morning Dogs by bgfay

bgfay — Fri, 06 Apr 2007 14:23:20 +0000

I was hoping to juxtapose the lives of the morning dogs with their weary owners. The dogs find the joy where we find only obligation. The dogs do what is to be done from walk to nap to food bowl without complaint. If I could say the same for my life it would be a real accomplishment.

Comment on David Shumate’s Next Prose Poem by bgfay

bgfay — Fri, 06 Apr 2007 12:57:18 +0000

…deb, as I’ve said to many others before you, the more you know about me, the less you’ll want to be like me.

Thanks everyone for the comments. I have revised this poem quite a lot since posting it here and the draft I have now is much better. Something that is in the package of poems I’m looking to send out for submission.

Now, if Mr. Shumate writes back, well, that would just be cool.